Persuasive Text Features Writing Term 4 Wk 2

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This week in writig i have been working on my writing doc. The writing we have been working on is called persuasive writing. Persuasive writing is when you are trying to convince someone to think the same thing as you. Now that i have explained what persuasive writing is now i am gonna tell you what i did. First There was 1 video  the video was about a girl breaking a boy’s gutair because she had a very cranky day and then she drank some sprite to cool her down so it was basically was about sprite. And then the 2 posters that we had to read. And the 1 of the poster was about messaging and why messaging is better than calling. The second poster was about cadbury chocolate and a poster that were trying to convince people to buy there chocolate. Now i am gonna tell you what we did. So basically we had to fill out each box and we had to answer who is the audience, what language features,etc. Then we had to make a lot of ideas in each box and write them down.

Anyways that is all thank you for reading BYEEE!!

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Questions Video Poster Text
What is the product? sprite Cadbury Chocolate Messaging 
Who is the audience?
  • People who think other kind of soda brands are better
  • People who love soda
  • People who think juice or water is better.
  • People who think other chocolate brands are better. 
  • People who love candy better than chocolate.
  • People who like chocolate
  • People who like to call more than texting
  • Hearing disabilities 
  • Shy and quiet people
  • When there are people who make a lot of noise/there are noises around them.
What language features have been used?
  • Creative music
  • Adjectives 
  • Adjectives 
  • Used tools to fix things(but in chocolate)
  • Adjectives 
  • Time connectives

(first,second,

After that, in addition,etc)

Evaluate:

Is it effective? Why/why not?

Not very effective but if you/I liked sprite i would think it would be very effective. It is very effective because I really don’t love chocolate but when it comes to Cadbury I love their chocolate. And they have been making chocolate for 200 years Very effective because I used to think calling is better than texting and has persuasive language. 
Interesting… Very interesting because when the girl broke the guitar it was very funny. Very interesting because of their way to present their cadbury chocolate At first I thought it was kinda boring but once I started to read it more it started to persuade me.

 

Poetry Anthology

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I have been working on my poetry anthology, First i did the writing and then changed the font and the background (ETC). So today I am going to take you to my journey of what i did. First I did my writing of my comparison poem if you don’t know what a comparison poem is i am going to write at then end. And then i did a wish poem and if you don’t know what a i wish poem is I will write it down at the end. And then I changed the background and the fonts (ETC).

Anyways that is all!

THANK YOU FOR READING! Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ

 

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I wish poem meaning:  a type of poem which state hopes and desires and may contain a central theme.

 

Comparison poem:   Used the word ‘as’ or ‘like’

 

Poetry Writing

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I have been working on my writing for two days. But i am going to explain what i did, First I had to choose 2 poetry for the tittle and the trail. Then we had to write the author name. Once we have choosen the tittle and the author we had to write down what was the poem about. We could work in buddy’s but we also can work by ourselves. After I had to write poetry ingredients if you don’t know what ‘poetry ingredients’ lt is what you have to add what a poetry writing needs. Anyways after that we had to draw a picture of the poem, well we didn’t have to we could insert an image. And we could leave the section that says ‘ poem 1’ and ‘ poem 2.’

 

Anyways that is all thank you for reading!

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Teacher’s Report Wk 9

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Today We had to write a teacher’s report about a teacher, There were 3 slides I had to work on. I chose my favorite teacher It was really easy and fun to do because We get to actually have a chance to write a report about a teacher. the reason i have picked this teacher is because She is my favorite teacher and she is also my homeroom teacher.

This all i could write byeee!

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Writing Persuasive Week 8 Term 4

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This is my is my Persuasive writing  journey, SO COME ALONG! Firstly we had a vote about non uniform or uniform and obiously I chose non uniform, Then we had a brainstorm sheet and write why mufti is better, Then we had to hightlight our three topic sentences, Then after that we had to write our topic sentences and examples, and then we wrote our introduction and conculsion. And then once we had done everything we had to write it on a document like how I did it. I am very proud of doing my work and finishing my work. This was took me a while but not that hard like it was in the middle.

Anyways this is my work!

Hope you enjoyed! (Please comment nice comments)

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Writing Week 4 & 5 -Character

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On week 4 and 5 me and some of my clasmates we were writing paragraph sentences. i tried to take a photo of my paragraph but it did not seem to work out. so i am going to write it instead. we also had to write 6 sentence and i did 6.

here is my sentences,

The wild things looked scary because of their sharp white teeth.

The wild things looks mad because of their sharp claws.

The wild things has yellow eyes like the bright sun and long luscious red hair.

The wild thing has webbed feet like a capybara.

The wild thing has yellow fur like her eyes.

The wild thing is swinging and having fun.

 

Thoes are my six sentences about the wild thing.

i hoped you like my sentences.

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Writing Week 6, problem conviersation

WALT: Share thoughts feelings and ideas with calarity.

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On Monday Ms hanrahan’s writing group we were writing conversation writing about the problem. On monday we had to brainstorm our ideas about the conversation. On Tuesday i was not here so i did not get to write that much on my conversation. But i did start my conversation on Monday.

Here is my conversation.

“Hi, who are you and where do you come from?” Said the wild thing gnashing his teeth.

Max replied saying, “Hi my name is Max i came from my room without any supper.” Said Max confidently.

 

(it is not finished yet i will comeback to it)

 

 

Mahdiya’s Capybaras Information Report

WALT: identify key ideas (imporant information) about our topic.

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today i am going to talk about my information report.

This was my first time writing an information reiiport it is not my best work but i tried.

I talked about the habitat, life cycle, physical  description, food, and predators.

i did not write that much but here is my information report note taking.

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brochure writing

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Today i am going tell you about my country information report!
first i toke notes on my culture, location, food, landmarks, impotant moments in history.
second i did my elaboration and examples and topic sentence
Then i started on my culture brochure. this was probably my favorite information report.
here is my culture brochure!